![]() The Demon God’s unspeakable name becomes dumb when Emma says it.ģ7. Why do they expect to get a good deal from it?ģ6. ![]() Why do they trust the Demon God? He’s the one the most promising children are sacrificed to. How do disguises even work? Demons should be on high alert due to Norman’s raids.ģ5. artistically dumb: narrow limit after a relaxed infodump better to start mission with time to spare, then run into delays.ģ3. Fake urgency 3: there was never a precise date (birthdays only matter for 12-year-olds).ģ2. Fake urgency 2: Other children are being shipped in the meantime.ģ1. Timeskip, fake urgency: only Phil knows what’s up, he is not in danger of being shipped soon.ģ0. Readers, especially magazine readers, can feel proud if they remembered, but it’s no achievement on part of the characters.Ģ9. Note: Gilda’s self-destruct button and Emma’s flare earlier are examples of out-of-universe cleverness. Many gatekeepers work alongside demons, would leak info. The scale of the secret construction is immense and impossible (2 hidden cities, several bunkers in ~7 years). Hugo parkours with severely wounded Emma with demons in hot pursuit, this does not make her wounds worse or anything.Ģ8. Where did they get medicine? Demons would not provide any, the wounded will soon be caught and eaten.Ģ7. No losses during the fight despite severe wounds, many “very important lessons” about how sacrificing yourself is baaaaaad and you shouldn’t do that.Ģ6. and dressed in Current Year made-in-Bangladesh street fashion (who supplies the clothes?).Ģ5. Resistance members are boring, permanently constipated, useless, waste of conceptual space.Ģ4. Writer says original windmill inhabitant is “a coward” because he “didn’t help others” - hiding everyone is impossible, hiding some means dooming others.Ģ3. Goldy Pond Resistance members compete against other humans to get eaten last. Children easily handle heavy weapons, know survival, Hugo is wasted as a character.Ģ1. The retard writer kills Hugo and shelves Ray.Ģ0. Emma hits Hugo in the dick because GURL POWER!!1! Fucking dumb.ġ9. Sonju and Musica say the children have made an enemy of Demon God - wrong and fake.ġ8. “Demons shall not hunt humans” is part of the Promise but broken.ġ7. Sequence of words is cumbersome (need to keep the book safe) and insecure (you know one code, you know them all). No more unusual flora or fauna is ever introduced, except for throwaway demon animal designs.ġ4. Hints in Minerva’s book are appropriately mystical and whimsical and it never happens again.ġ3. Too much babysitting for one woman + casual help from 2 girls.ġ2. Children find a secret room but never consider where their gourmet food comes from, massive amount of work being done (hidden compound).ġ1. Demons speak English for children to eavesdrop they also have demon language.ġ0. Ray asks for tech, gets “old models” (ipod, PSP) - do Ratri warehouse this for decades? Why are they in working order? He complains photos come out dark without a flash (that he removed), but Polaroid shelf life is 12 months.ĩ. (I like to think the reason is this: children’s books went to shit in Current Year, what with drag queens and such newer (globohomo) books are simply not conducive to producing healthy, intelligent, delicious children, and aren’t imported anymore.)Ĩ. Inconsistent with orphanage apparent tech level, there’s stuff in the books children know to want but don’t have. No books newer than 2015 - why? Minerva didn’t die until much later. Children never wonder what demons call themselves.ħ. Demon books available in library despite heavy censorship.Ħ. Emma cutting off her ear won no time at all.ĥ. Plot contrivance to justify Norman’s later absence.Ĥ. Why not split up and run to the wall? Mom already knows who’s aware. Why did Isabella remove the shitty drawing? Try to pretend to be sad.ģ. Why physical tracker? (impossible) Why not magic? Demons exist.Ģ. Let the little girls say: “To be good is what is pretty, and at the same time touching.”ġ.
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